读后续写之情感情绪细节刻画
一、直接利用恰当的表情感的形容词、副词或名词、介词短语等表达人物的喜怒哀乐
例如：快乐(happy，delighted, pleased, joyful, enjoyable 等)、吃惊(surprised，shocked, amazed， astonished)等形容词或介词短语(to one’s surprise，in relief, in panic)等描述人物的情绪。
二、利用环境细节鍬情于景”烘托人物的情感
例如：Della finished her crying and dried her face. She stood by the window and looked out unhappily at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.(小说《麦琪的礼物》中利用 3个形容词gray,体现了 Della的难受和不开心。）
三、利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪 例如：下面文章片段中的句子：
With no path to follow^ Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around^ hoping to see the lake.(动作描写，说明 Jane 满怀期望）To her surprise，（利 ./!]介词短语体现 Jane 的吃惊）she saw nothing but forest.and，, far beyond，, a snow-capped mountain top. (寓情于景，体现 Jane 的无望失落）She suddenly realized that she was lost.
四、利用高级句式和修饰成分细化情感细节
例如：□“Absolutely!” replied John，excitement shinning in his eyes.(利用名词 excitement 和独 立主格结构，描写John的兴奋激动）
约翰答道，“一定”，他两眼兴奋地闪闪发光。
□ So angry was the bear that it roared and smacked the fence vio丨ently. (so.“that 倒装句型）
熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏。
□You can not imagine how frightened we were at the approach of the polar bear, (how 引导的宾 语从句，介词短语）
你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们多么的恐惧。
【策略撖练】
I.按要求补全下面动作、情感和心理细节的句子
1.简又害怕又无助，靠着一棟树坐下，歇歇疼痛的双脚。
________, Jane sat against a tree,_.砂容词短语排谓语动词作状语）
2.“如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我现在就不会被困在这里了，”她想，悔恨的泪水模糊了她的眼睛。
3.她挣扎着站起来寻找那个湖。
__, ” she thought to herself
.虚拟语气的倒装句，with复合结构)